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 = 1984 - Beginning of the story
 
 *government:*\
-In the extract the protagonist detects the police snooping on through the windows of others via a helicopter and knows that the government is constantly hearing and seeing what he does.
+In the excerpt, the protagonist discovers the police spying through other people's windows from a helicopter and knows that the government is constantly listening and watching what he does.
 
 *society:*\
-Society seems to constantly have to live in fear of saying the wrong thing and being aprehended for having your own thoughts.
-The outside of their own four walls seems desolate and without colour, with which we can say that it should be some industrious city or citypart, whose lack of appearance indicates, that inhabitants don't have to time nor ressources to better their environment.
+Society seems to live in constant fear of saying the wrong thing and of being understood for having its own thoughts.
+The outside of their own four walls seems desolate and without color, which we can say that it should be some industrious city or part of the city, whose lack of appearance indicates that the inhabitants don't have time or resources to improve their environment.
 
 *technology:*\
-Technology is presented in the extract via the telescreen, which constantly emits the latest and greatest propaganda or "news", whilst also spying on the inhabitants of each flat via recording of audio and video, with no sign shown of being watched meaning you would just have to assume that you are being watched.
+The technology is presented in the excerpt via the telescreen, which constantly broadcasts the latest and greatest propaganda or "news", while also spying on the inhabitants of each apartment via audio and video recordings, with no indication that they are being watched, meaning that one would only have to assume that they are being watched.
 
 == Homework
 
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+#import "@preview/grape-suite:1.0.0": exercise
+#import exercise: project
+
+#set text(lang: "en")
+
+#show: project.with(
+  title: [atmosphere in a dystopian novel],
+  seminar: [Englisch Q2],
+  show-outline: true,
+  author: "Erik Grobecker",
+  date: datetime(day: 27, month: 11, year: 2024),
+  show-solutions: false,
+)
+
+#show "=>": sym.arrow.double
+#show "->": sym.arrow
+#show "neg": text(red)[negative]
+
+= Atmosphere
+
+- color
+- weather
+- connotation
+- setting
+- smell
+- environment
+  - buildings
+  - nature
+- mood
+  - oneself
+  - others
+- behaviour
+
+*plenum:*
+- Atmosphere
+  - settings/circumstances
+    - place
+    - time
+    - weather
+    - objects
+    - situation
+  - characters
+    - appearance
+    - behaviour
+    - language
+    - interaction
+  - narrator's voice
+    - choice of words
+    - use of imagery, contrasts and other devices
+    - allusions, e.g. also previous/future events
+
+#pagebreak()
+
+== setting of the excerpt
+
+- places
+  - hallway (ll. 1-6)
+    - smell: boiled cabbage, old rag mats -> neg, discomfort
+  - stairs (ll. 6-12)
+    - lift can't be used -> neg
+  - outside the stairs (ll. 12-17)
+  - flat (ll. 17-24)
+  - outside the window (ll. 31-44)
+- time
+  - daytime
+  - spring ("winter had just ended" ll. 29-30)
+- weather
+  - blue sky (l. 34)
+  - windy (ll. 32-33)
+- objects
+  - telescreen
+    - records whatever one does (ll. 45-46) -> neg
+    - broadcasts news permanently with no way of turning it off (ll. 23-24) -> neg
+  - helicopter
+  - posters plastered everywhere (ll. 35-39) of "BIG BROTHER" -> neg
+    - nothing else has color (ll. 34-35) -> neg
+    - seems to watch the viewer from every point of view -> neg
+- situation
+  - Winstons comes back home (ll. 1-17)
+    - has to excert much energy to make it up the stairs -> neg
+  - looks outside window
+  - being watched (telescreen) the whole time (ll. 45-46)
+    - permanent surveillance -> neg
+  - electric is cut off during daylight hours (l. 9) -> neg
+    - unable to use lift
+
+/*
+In the excerpt Winston comes home, during which he excerts himself climbing up the stairs, here one object appears, the swarm of posters depicting "BIG BROTHER" who seems to always watch him.
+Once inside his flat lies the telescreen which not unlike the posters always watches him but also listens, with both the posters and the screens seemingly constantly watching a person, one would be heavily constrained in the actions to undertake.
+*/
+
+*as a group:*
+- constant surveillance -> uncanny
+- cabbage smell, non-working electrics -> dismal
+
+#pagebreak()
+
+=== other groups
+
+- characters
+  - physical appearance: smallish frail figure -> glooming, depressing
+  - allusion: Hitler -> tensive
+- narrator's voice
+  - few contrasts between environment and posters
+  - no conversations -> lonly, no one to talk to
+  - choice of words -> eerie, dismal
+  - no color in anything -> lifeless, dismal
+  - formal and complex words
+  - third person limited narrator
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